Sunday 11 December 2011

quicksand

Fears,
Anxieties,
Regrets.


Grain by grain
Through life,
Paralising
Until escape
To serenity
Becomes seemingly
Unreachable.

Posted for Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 95
Picture courtesy of Tess Kincaid

6 comments:

  1. Wonderful first attempt JC!

    For sure a lot could relate to this.

    JJRod'z

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  2. I thoroughly enjoyed your magpie .... the title a perfect introduction to the poem.

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  3. yes those three will rob much if not all of the joy out of life......nice write...

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  4. So very true JC....great writing! :-)

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  5. brilliant thoughts.




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