Sunday, 11 December 2011

quicksand

Fears,
Anxieties,
Regrets.


Grain by grain
Through life,
Paralising
Until escape
To serenity
Becomes seemingly
Unreachable.

Posted for Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 95
Picture courtesy of Tess Kincaid
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6 comments:

  1. JJ Roa Rodriguez11 December 2011 at 21:13

    Wonderful first attempt JC!

    For sure a lot could relate to this.

    JJRod'z

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  2. Helen12 December 2011 at 12:20

    I thoroughly enjoyed your magpie .... the title a perfect introduction to the poem.

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  3. Helen12 December 2011 at 18:20

    Reaching is the answer ....

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  4. Brian Miller12 December 2011 at 22:23

    yes those three will rob much if not all of the joy out of life......nice write...

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  5. Carrie Van Horn13 December 2011 at 11:43

    So very true JC....great writing! :-)

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  6. Hyde Park Poetry Palace30 December 2011 at 23:10

    brilliant thoughts.




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