Sunday 29 January 2012

Order in Chaos

Universe in chaos
Nebula of consistency
World in disarray
Patches of sensibility
Order in Chaos




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Posted for Magpie Tales
Photo Prompt 102
Photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid

21 comments:

  1. I too saw chaos in this one...like your take on it. Nice Work

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    1. Thanks, JJ, but I actually lost my pen so I just typed it. LoL

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    2. I took them... I'll return it this weekend... LOL!..

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  3. Order in chaos, I like it. Well done.

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  4. funny, I didn't see chaos......but I can see it now
    nice poem

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    1. Thanks, Suz. It's more the orderly aspects that caught my eye first then it made sense.

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  5. second one in a row acknowledging the chaos of our world...finding those moments of order is a beautiful thing...

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  6. Thank goodness for patches of sensibility...

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  7. There is an order of chaos... smiles...

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  8. Clever write - there is indeed some order in chaos.

    Anna :o]

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  9. Thanks for leading us out of the chaos.
    Well done.

    =)

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  10. YES! There is a satisfying order in the painting's chaos - just the right amount!

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  11. I like this, there's a logic to it.

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  12. Not much sense where I hang out...Hehehe!

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  13. Chaotic yes! That's a world in conflict but good sense prevails in many instances also. Great verse JC.

    Hank

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