Sunday, 29 January 2012

Order in Chaos

Universe in chaos
Nebula of consistency
World in disarray
Patches of sensibility
Order in Chaos




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Posted for Magpie Tales
Photo Prompt 102
Photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid
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21 comments:

  1. Laurie Kolp29 January 2012 at 09:56

    Intriguing... order in chaos.

    http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/chilling-out.html

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  2. Grammy29 January 2012 at 10:38

    Well done :)

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  3. Susie Clevenger29 January 2012 at 12:17

    I too saw chaos in this one...like your take on it. Nice Work

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  4. JJ Roa Rodriguez29 January 2012 at 13:07

    Nicely penned...

    JJRod'z

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    1. Jim Calcutt29 January 2012 at 19:02

      Thanks, JJ, but I actually lost my pen so I just typed it. LoL

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    2. JJ Roa Rodriguez29 January 2012 at 19:11

      I took them... I'll return it this weekend... LOL!..

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  5. Doctor FTSE29 January 2012 at 13:32

    Yes, chaos is all around us.

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  6. Karen29 January 2012 at 15:19

    Order in chaos, I like it. Well done.

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  7. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry29 January 2012 at 15:37

    short and profound.

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  8. Suz29 January 2012 at 18:49

    funny, I didn't see chaos......but I can see it now
    nice poem

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    1. Jim Calcutt29 January 2012 at 18:58

      Thanks, Suz. It's more the orderly aspects that caught my eye first then it made sense.

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  9. Brian Miller29 January 2012 at 23:12

    second one in a row acknowledging the chaos of our world...finding those moments of order is a beautiful thing...

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  10. Jinksy30 January 2012 at 01:55

    Thank goodness for patches of sensibility...

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  11. booguloo30 January 2012 at 10:03

    There is an order of chaos... smiles...

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  12. hyperCRYPTICal30 January 2012 at 12:57

    Clever write - there is indeed some order in chaos.

    Anna :o]

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  13. Susan Anderson30 January 2012 at 15:00

    Thanks for leading us out of the chaos.
    Well done.

    =)

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  14. Maggie30 January 2012 at 16:01

    That's it, exactly! : )

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  15. Helen30 January 2012 at 22:02

    YES! There is a satisfying order in the painting's chaos - just the right amount!

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  16. Dave King31 January 2012 at 09:25

    I like this, there's a logic to it.

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  17. Cad2 February 2012 at 02:23

    Not much sense where I hang out...Hehehe!

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  18. kaykuala3 February 2012 at 09:56

    Chaotic yes! That's a world in conflict but good sense prevails in many instances also. Great verse JC.

    Hank

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