Sunday, 16 September 2012

Eternal Embrace

Venus and The Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali

Eternally entwined
In a saltation divine,
Captured mid-step
By a genius adept.

Venus, with your glamour,
I am truly enamoured
To be evermore en-laced
In your glorious embrace.

posted for Magpie Tales
photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid

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8 comments:

  1. Tess Kincaid16 September 2012 at 10:12

    This is really beautiful, JC.

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  2. Brian Miller16 September 2012 at 10:55

    nice...it really is lovely...and i like the divinity play...to be evermore enlaced...that whole section toward the end just really flows marvelously....

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  3. Little Nell16 September 2012 at 13:18

    How lovely, a saltation divine. Nice rhyming and rhythm too.

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  4. JJ Roa Rodriguez16 September 2012 at 15:29

    Well done again my love!.. As of my post... We will make it happen...

    JJRod'z

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  5. Margaret16 September 2012 at 23:44

    Richly worded I enjoyed the flowing, graceful pace of this poem.

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  6. Silent Otto 17 September 2012 at 06:33

    Very powerful, very worthy invocation , thanks

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  7. Helen17 September 2012 at 13:07

    Love how you used the word saltation .......... perfect in the poem.

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  8. Susan Anderson17 September 2012 at 19:01

    Well done. This one works well, and I like the rhymes.

    =)

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