Sunday, 19 February 2012

Mag 105 image: epic mahoney

Thanks to Tess Kincaid of The Mag
Neon Oasis

I can see you in the distance
So close, so far.

Longing to hear the sound of your voice
Which was slowly fading into the shadows of my mind.

Only hours away...
I need you now.

Godsend neon oasis of contact
In the wasteland of my mind.

Finally I can hear you.

If only I could touch you, hold you...
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15 comments:

  1. JJ Roa Rodriguez19 February 2012 at 10:51

    Guess we are both on same line of thoughts... Love it JC...

    Guess every 9 days only our cellphone is our best way to be connected...

    JJRod'z

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  2. JANU19 February 2012 at 11:11

    This is romantic...good one.

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  3. Mimi Foxmorton19 February 2012 at 11:21

    Beautiful. I miss being called from a phone booth.

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  4. Berowne19 February 2012 at 13:22

    Well written, moving...

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  5. Laurie Kolp19 February 2012 at 13:38

    I like this, especially:

    Godsend neon oasis of contact
    In the wasteland of my mind.

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  6. Karen19 February 2012 at 13:58

    Terrific, love neon oasis!

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    1. Brian Miller19 February 2012 at 15:06

      ah i know that longing...just to hear the voice...and then of course wanting more...smiles....that neon oasis line is great!

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  7. robkistner19 February 2012 at 15:24

    Enjoyed this, good work…

    …rob kistner
    Image & Verse

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  8. ayala19 February 2012 at 19:41

    Nice...I can feel the longing.

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  9. hyperCRYPTICal20 February 2012 at 12:07

    Enjoyed this - thank you.

    Anna :o]

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  10. Doctor FTSE20 February 2012 at 16:12

    Either you are very romantic or he/she is faster on a bike.

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  11. Carrie Van Horn20 February 2012 at 17:26

    This is a beautiful take!

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  12. Little Nell21 February 2012 at 07:13

    I can definitely feel the longing and the urge to make that connection; lovely words.

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  13. Jinksy21 February 2012 at 10:12

    Phones only give a tenuous link, don't they? But better than nothing...

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  14. Arian Tejano23 February 2012 at 04:30

    a truly felt write.

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